In our lesson with Sharon today, we had to pair up with someone and discuss our blogs, then give each other some advice on how we could improve. I paired up with Hannah and she gave me some really good advice. She told me that to improve, I could do with posting some more examples of experimenting with make up outside of lesson time. She told me that she really liked my analytical writing, but I could do with making some more historical references when doing contemporary research.
When I was looking through her blog, I realised that I had missed something! I realised that I hadnt done a post on actresses that have played elizabeth over the years. This session was really helpful as it has enabled me to improve my blog and fill in any gaps I missed. I think I will suggest getting together again in a few weeks time, so we can give each other more advice and make sure we are both on track.
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